That's not a critique. It's a drive-by snark. A useful critique will actually
point out what is right/wrong, ideally with reasoned argument and an understanding
of the principles readily apparent.
All you do is say "this is dumb". That's dumb. Worse than that, its lazy and
arrogant. Make that slothful. You don't give the interested reader any information
on which to assess your complaint. You lay it out like a cow-pattie in a field.
At least the cow-pattie is nascent fertilizer.
When you actually write a critique, let us know.