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in reply to Review of my script

There are a number of details I would nit-pick about, but, after all, you're applying to be an intern, not the company guru. It looks mostly correct, I'll assume you've verified it works, and does what it's supposed to.

Two things I would suggest, however.

As Occam said: Entia non sunt multiplicanda praeter necessitatem.