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I love your poem!

HTH,

planetscape
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Re^5: planetscape and me: 1282 nodes apiece
by chacham (Prior) on Jun 17, 2015 at 12:49 UTC

    Thanx. It's expressing a thought, though, admittedly, i don't like the AABB rhyme there. It sounds a little awkward. Not sure why.